Feedback and Revisions

Based on the feedback I have received from presenting my magazine, I would like to make a few changes and adjustments. On the cover, my group and I decides that the position of the title is unconventional, and we are going to move it to not go down the side of the page. This would make he cover page look much more organized. I can edit this in publisher. Also, I would like to edit the photo on the cover page and adjust the colors. This would enhance the overall look and i can edit it in Photoshop. In the article, I will have to justify the text so that it looks neater and the edges are straight. I was also make one photo bigger so that it is the main focus instead of having all of them be the same size. I will make these corrections in publisher. This will improve my magazine overall and make it more appealing for the audience to read and look at.