Article Revisions

These revisions were made on Indesign. The top two images are before I made my revisions after experimenting with Indesign in class. The bottom two are after I made my revisions. The text was more spaced and much easier to read. The main photo on the first page was changed to something I thought the readers would be more interested in. This picture was also moved and expanded to fill almost all of the top half of the magazine. Therefore the title "Sailor Spirit" is overlapping this photo. It was strategically placed in the open area of the sky making it easy to read. In the first revision, the text at the bottom of the page was bunched together making it illegible and you are unable to read it. I was able to fix this problem and now all the words are visible.